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ice_c_car by   jorge
  

 
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 mtn 
07 June 2010
 
I'd say that you met your intentions - I love ice cream carts so this is a cute, fun model.

My suggestions: add some more light reflecting off of the pictures so it looks like they were put on the cart in real life and not that the side of the cart was textured that way. I agree with the suggestions of the reviewer below me - perhaps curl a few of the posters' edges?

I googled pictures of ice cream carts and it looks like most of them have four wheels, a 3rd wheel, or some kind of break system, which you can look into. Ooh, and I would love to see the lid flip up in the animation. It would create a little anticipation if you ended up modeling ice cream bars for the inside. :^) I like the images that you have for the posters though...whether you add more or not, I'd keep these.
 Isabel Tabares 
05 June 2010
 
Yes it does, however the pictures a bit distracting. I would suggest using different images. Usually when i see little carts like this they have a lot of small pics, are usually old and dirty. So if you want to make it looks a bit more realistic i would suggest on doing that.
 leonardo_chavez 
03 June 2010
 
I really like you model very realistic and the modeling is really good . Good job
 JuanRangel 
17 March 2010
 
Shouldn't the spring be on top of the tube, not underneath it? Also more smaller bounces should fallow after the big one.
 Casillas Jose 
17 March 2010
 
I love this little ice cream box, especially the way it bounces alittle like it's going over rough roads. My one complaint is that even though the wheels are moving it looks like it's moving in place and not going anywhere.
 coreyhill97 
11 March 2010
 
hey there, well to put it kindly the texturing could be a bit better on the actual ice cream box looks like you just grabbed faces and threw textures on there, the camera work is okay, the wheels are fairly nice might want to make them a bit smaller and take away the blue thing on the bottom takes away from the project, that or change the color, but other than that its a good start keep it up!
 Victor Pham 
03 March 2010
 
hmm, i'm sorry but you need to make this icecream mobile more real, doesnt seem like you had put much timeand effort into making this.
 cameronaustin 
03 March 2010
 
Texture, modelling and animation work is all very nice, the cartoon cow on the back gives it a bit of personality. The only think I might suggest changing is to have the shocks depress rather than popping up before bouncing and settling.
 
Artist's Comments
Posted on 26 February 2010

Student's intentions
show something fun

Student's questions
looks all right?

Hardware/Software
3ds max

Target Industries
Independent Films