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bike by   jorge
  

 
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 fmt714 
03 June 2010
 
The bike model is good. Motion and speed is fair enough to observe. Maybe the dislocation of the bike can be more realistic when there is a background.
 leonardo_chavez 
03 June 2010
 
I like the bike is really nice the movement and all good job
 Alejandra Garcia 
03 June 2010
 
nice bike. I like the movements of the bike. Add the chain and pedals and when you do, make them move too. Nice job
 mtn 
02 June 2010
 
That's a nice looking bike. I'm assuming that you will still add chains and pedals so I won't comment on those. I think for the joints where the parts rotate, you can add more extrusion or definition to show that there's a joint there, and not just the bike being able to move however which way. Like a knob?

The tires could use more texture, like showing the tread, and maybe you could have light reflecting off the spokes.

I think the design of the bike is quite good. You might want to add hand grips for the handlebars. Those are the only suggestions I can think of so far. The metal parts look very smooth and flow well, and the upper bar follows the shape of the lower bar, which makes it more unified. Good job!
 JuanRangel 
17 March 2010
 
I like how the bike look but the handlebar dose not mach the rest of the bike. Also when the handlebar turns part of it goes through the bike.
 Casillas Jose 
17 March 2010
 
I like this bike, especially the way you showed all the specific moveable parts of the bike. I would like to see some textures on the bike when it's done along with pedals moving in sync with the wheels.
 coreyhill97 
09 March 2010
 
Hi there Jorge, overall i like the bike very much i can see this being in a little animation clip with similar modeling styles. The wheel rotation is great, the only thing i might possibly change is the handlebar modeling. Other than that nice work, keep it up!
 unrooolie 
17 February 2010
 
Great job the bike looks great, it moves quite well if you throw some better textures on it. It will look even better
 jorge 
(Artist's reply)
18 February 2010
 
tanks, I will do that on the future tanks for the advice.
 Sreyeesh_Garimella 
11 February 2010
 
This is not a bad bike. It's pretty good, I would like to see the rig and how you made it. Other wise for a bike it's built well, and moves well.
 jorge 
(Artist's reply)
12 February 2010
 
tanks 4 you comment, I will post the wheel and tired to show the work.
 Clynch 
17 March 2010
 
Hey Jorge, the bike and animation are coming along great. If you're looking for ways to take it further, you should try adding the pedals and chain to the bike. Then you can challenge yourself further by animating them along with the current animations on the wheels.
 
Artist's Comments
Posted on 28 January 2010

Student's intentions
show constraints on dummies

Student's questions
how I'm doing it?

Hardware/Software
autodesk 3ds max 2009

Target Industries
Independent Films